If Roman was in charge


Well now, Klaus Iohannis is in charge of Romania, but if I was in charge of Romania I would say: NO HOMEWORK, eat sweets at breakfast, lunch and dinner but when you really want to eat something with salt you can eat it oh and NO PSD, UDMR & NO ALDE that’s for sure and I also want there to be no school, sorry teachers you will need another job.
I will want all the people to be free to do what they want but to not kill each other and be silly on the streets so feel free OK.

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  1. Unknown18 March 2018 at 02:39

    Hi Roman (great name),
    I love that you locate your story in political reality - it adds authority to your story, which is what most narrators look for when telling a tale. Your brazen narrative voice is funny and energetic, especially your not-so-sorry apology to the teachers. Your use of full caps is effective and adds force to your writing (and yes, you are allowed to do that in your own creative writing!) If you are interested in 'if I was in charge' as a literary genre, you could ask your teacher/look up Thomas More's "Utopia", the first book of its kind and where the word 'utopia' was invented.
    Well done again!
    All the best,
    Elise (Team 100) - Coventry, UK :)

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